Okay, so I’ve been fiddling with the interior of WAITING, but I need help with the blurb for the back cover. Here’s what I’ve come up with, and as I find this process the hardest to put together, I’m asking for your help. If you don’t mind giving advice, I’d welcome your input.
EVE SMITH ISN’T A NORMAL GIRL.
Sure, two different coloured eyes is maybe an exception, add the ability to see visions and hear voices, and normal becomes an untouchable ideal. But if it’s her destiny to save humankind, it has its advantages.
Fate, on the other hand, has another agenda.
Abandoned by her dream companion to the demons of her nightmares, a dark figure comes to her aid, igniting a cascade of events that forces Eve in search of answers.
Tormented by her visions, Eve seeks the help of her therapist, awakening a part of her otherworldly life she had no idea existed. A forgotten destiny that connects Bastian’s, the dark figure, with her own.
A caregiver dies. Eve survives an attack on her life, and she soon discovers the new girl at the home is the culprit.
Sent to Cambridge to recuperate, Eve uncovers a hidden secret to her past. However, is the tale “The Guardians” have woven indeed real: are Bastian and Eve truly soul guides? Or does a deeper meaning lurk in the past, waiting to be uncovered?
Does it flow? Does it make sense? Should I start over again? As I said, any input would be greatly appreciated.