After a few attempts, and the much appreciated help from Sophie, here is the revised blurb for WAITING.
Eve Smith isn’t normal.
Different coloured eyes. Visions. Hearing voices. Add a vindictive dream companion and a dark figure as a saviour and normal, becomes an untouchable ideal.
Tormented by her nightmares, Eve seeks the help of her therapist, awakening a part of her otherworldly life she had no idea existed. A forgotten destiny that connects, Bastian’s, the dark figure, with her own.
A caregiver dies. Eve survives an attack on her life, and she soon discovers the new girl at the home is the culprit.
But is the tale “The Guardians” have woven indeed real: are Eve and Bastian truly soul guides? Or does a deeper meaning lurk in the past waiting to be uncovered.
Once again, I am asking for your help and honest opinions.