…THE ISLAND OF TAZLAT AND THE TIBJET.
Arlo Twittle part 6.
They spent the morning playing snap. Arlo found it difficult to concentrate, pondering instead about the weird, smiling cat and ended up losing every game.
He was grateful when lunchtime arrived, and nibbled at the ham and cheese sandwiches and sipped slowly at the glass of orange squash. After he had finished he went to play in the back garden, leaving Mrs. Butcher alone to make the cake for afternoon tea.
After a wasted game of hunt the lion, he sat quiet, hidden in the jungle of tall grass under the shade of a rather oversized plum-tree. Flies and bees were buzzing in the lazy warm air. The odd chirping of a cricket joined in the melody as it rubbed its legs together.
Arlo closed his eyes and breathed in, smelling the earthy scent of grass and flowers. A sweet, chocolatety aroma floated on the light breeze to where he was sitting, and he licked his lips.
Mrs. Butcher had told him once “when you smell the cake baking it’s almost done”, and she had never been wrong yet.
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The sense of smell, always such a great one to evoke reactions in the protagonist and the reader, I can almost smell a cake myself :).
Tasha
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You’re so right, it is important to get a feel of the characters through their senses, and who can’t resist the smell of a chocolate cake. 😉
I love this bit: …hidden in the jungle of tall grass under the shade of a rather oversized plum-tree. Flies and bees were buzzing in the lazy warm air., it put me right there in the garden 🙂
Sophie
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🙂 Thank you! But I do have a tendency to use rather a lot in my writing. Ho hum. 😉
Talkative and annoying. Ha. Sounds like a little sister. 🙂
“at the glass of orange squash”… is he drinking a squash shake?
Yep, that’s me to a T. I was the youngest of eight!
LOL, no orange squash is a drink you dilute with water. Maybe I should change that? 😉
Now I’m craving chocolate cake:) Awesome sensory details!
WriterlySam
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Go! Never stand in the way of someone craving chocolate cake. Dangerous! 😉